Hi Neveah Lee, I agree with Maria. You have some good headings in your project but I would like to see more information. Some slides only have one sentence. You have written some great things already I would like to see more.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Neveah lee , I like the facts you have shared about earth and space. Remember to use colours that are easy to see on your background.
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Hi Neveah Lee, I agree with Maria. You have some good headings in your project but I would like to see more information. Some slides only have one sentence. You have written some great things already I would like to see more.
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